Sunday, February 13, 2011

Thinking About You

Sometimes I wonder if people think about me.  Like if they ever stop what they're doing and just wonder where I am or what I'm doing.  There is a person I think about.  When I'm in school, or at home, or whatever.  And that person is you.  I'm thinking about you now as a matter of fact.  I'm thinking about you like, like I can't stop thinking about you.  I'm thinking about you like your love is my drug,  like I can't wait til the next time we hug.  Like it's a dark cold winter night and you are the mug of hot chocolate that's keeping me safe and warm.  I'm thinking about you like dogs think about chasing cats.  I'm thinking about you like sluggers think about their favorite bat.  Like black thinks about white and positive thinks about negative and night thinks about day.  I'm thinking about you like it's the only thing that gets me through the day.  I'm thinking about you like printers think about paper.  I'm thinking about you like stones think about rolling, like young couples think about strolling.  Like Peter Pan thinks about crowing.  I'm think, think, thinking about you like Winnie thinks about honey.  I'm thinking about you like honey, I think we shrunk ourselves but it's ok cause we're still together.  I'm thinking about you like I wonder if you wonder if people think about you.  And I wonder if you think that I'm the one that thinks about you.  Because I do.

5 comments:

  1. Its cool how you put that intro in there like you're actually talking to the person. That was a cool way to do it I loved it!

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  2. I really like your first line. I think everyone wonders that at some point. Way to point it out.

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  3. i like what you did to make it more a note that you wrote to that person.

    I like the line, "...Like it's a dark cold winter night and you are the mug of hot chocolate that's keeping me safe and warm..." It shows that you care not just that you like her, know what I mean?

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  4. :) wow! this post made me so happy for who ever you're writing about! this was awaesome! i really like reading your stuff! you are a very good writer! you keep me way interested! keep it up! i look forward to what ever you post next!

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  5. Wow.... I really liked how you started with the option of others thinking about you. Then you transcended into the point of you thinking about someone.

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